In my quest to keep learning, and when necessary own and correct my errors, I acknowledge that the idea of the Haiku is not to colour the words with a title and perhaps an image, as this takes away the message that the words themselves deliver to the reader.
However as we now live in a very technological age where images dominate I have included an image also for those who prefer that type of modern haiku.
Haiku #4
Mood dark and heavy
Clouds descend and fill my heart
Rain falls here again
© Cheryl Mary Coleman, 2018 – Haiku #4 12.6.18
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If you like this poem please feel free to share, as it may just be what someone needs to brighten their day.
If you feel so inclined to leave a comment or feedback, know this I will be extremely grateful, and look forward to connecting with you, thank you, Cheryl.
What a touching haiku! And I agree about the images. Sometimes I try to find an image to compensate for writing that I think is bad instead of making the writing better, so using your approach would make me focus on my writing more. But Its a pretty bold move, in my opinion.
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Thank you Kat for taking the time to comment. I am enjoying the new challenge 🧡💚
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Very well written! I Loved it!
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Thank you 💜
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Thank you so much, for taking the time to comment. So glad you like it 💜
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Love “again”. So touching.
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